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Annoying. If you asked him to use one word to describe her, he would use that one word. He hated how happy she was all the time, she always smiled at him, her (e/c) sparkling eyes when she saw him. He didn't hate her, but he didn't like her either. But for some strange reason every time he saw Flavio talking to her he would get angry and chase him away from her, the same went for any guy who tried to flirt with her.
One day, she was walking to school, she was looking at the ground, and she wasn't watching where she was going, and she walked strait into one of the baddest people in school, Jason.
"Watch where ya goin' bitch!" He spat at her.
"S-sorry.." she quickly apologised and tried to walk past him, but Jason grabbed her arm.
"I think you need to apologise in a different way, toots," he smirked.
"Hey idiota! It's too early for your shit," Maximo yelled at Jason and walked over to the two. Jason glared at the Spaniard and raised his fist at him.
"Jason, poppet! It's too early for this!" Oliver appeared out of no where and grabbed Jason's fist. "Lets go, love!" The Britt pulled the American away.
"What the hell is wrong with you?!" Maximo snapped at the girl.
"Sorry, Maximo.." she smiled at him, but some thing was different. She had her hair fixed to where her left eye was covered by her (h/l) (h/c) bangs, she usually had the hair out of her eyes because it bothered her, and the eye that he could see looked like it was lifeless.
"You ok? You look like some one killed you then brought you back to life," he frowned, his dark brown eyes studying her face. She stared at him for a few minutes, then the first bell rang letting the students know it was time to start heading to class. 'Yes! Saved by the bell!' She mentally thanked the gods.
"I-i have to go Maximo," her smile softened as she turned to run to the school building, "I'll see you later!" She yelled as she reached the doors.
"sí .. más tarde(yeah.. later), (Y/n)," he mumbled and walked to his first class.
When he got there, François and Gilen were waiting for him outside the class room. It being an outside class, François was smoking.
"Hey," Gilen looked at him, "you seemed troubled."
"It nothing," Maximo glared.
"I bet it's (Y/n)," François said blowing smoke. "I saw her walking to school today, doesn't her father usually drive her?" Maximo nodded. He had barely met the man that (Y/n) calls her father, and he hated him more than he hated guys trying to flirt with her.
"I think Maxi's in love!" Flavio laughed and walked over to them.
"¡¿qué?! no estoy!(what?! I am not!)" He snapped at Flavio. The blonde Italian just laughed.
"Sì amico mio(yes my friend), why else would you chase off every guy who flirts, or at least try to flirt, with her!" Flavio smiled. Maximo blushed as red as one of his tomato's, but said nothing. The four walked into the smaller building next to the school and took their seats.
Flavio was right. He did love the happy girl. He wanted nothing to happen to her. When she turned away from him, he could have sworn he saw the edge of a big bruise on her left eye. It made him sick to his stomach, who would want to hurt a sweet girl?! Well he shouldn't have thought that because he knew a few people who would hurt her and not even think twice about it. He glared at his desk. He couldn't confront her about it, she would say that she was being clumsy and she accidentally ran into a door or some thing. No, he had to do something else. He laid his head down, not really paying attention any way, and started to think of ways to get her to fess up about what happened.
By lunch, he had an idea of what he would do. He looked at (Y/n) while she sat down with out a lunch, he raised an eye brow.
"Ain't ya gonna eat any thing?" He asked her.
"Hmm? Oh!" She laughed nervously, "I-I kinda forgot my money at home.. i'm not hungry any way," she smiled at him.
"You've said that for the last week," his eyes narrowed, and he took a bite of a tomato he packed. She just smiled at him. Her left eye was still covered, but there was a small part in her hair to where he could see what he thought was his imagination. A black and purple bruise covering her eye. He glared at the bruise.
"I-I.. I'm going to the library to study.." she stuttered and quickly left.
He watched her leave, and took note that her clothes were baggy on her. No one dared bully her, because Maximo was always near by her, so she was under no pressure to lose weight, hell she didn't have any fat on her to begin with! She was perfect in his eyes.
After school, he saw her leaving to walk home. He walked after her and she glanced at him.
"Why are you walking this way? Don't you live the other way?" She asked softly.
"Sí(yes)," he grunted, "i'm walking you home."
"Y-You don't have to," she panicked.
"I know," he looked at her.
"P-please don't.."
"You don't have a choice," he looked into her (e/c) eyes, "tell me how you got that ugly thing on your face." She looked down. "Look at me." She slowly looked back up at him.
"I..... i hit a door..." she frowned and walked past him. She didn't lie to him, she did hit a door, well more like she got thrown into a door. He followed her in silence. He had never been to her house before, she had been to his before though. Looking around, he realised that her house was in a fairly good neighbor hood, but when they got to her house, it was small and run down. Not like the other houses.
"Thank you for walking me home.." she smiled at him.
"(Y/n)..." Maximo subconsciously moved the hair in her face out of the way, making her blush. He leaned in closer to her, blush slowly forming on his face. (Y/n) looked up at him, closing her eyes lightly. Right as Maximo was about to kiss her.
"(Y/n)! Kad ouin ycc eh rana nekrd huf! Frana fana oui?! Yht fru dra vilg ec dryd?!(get your ass in here right now! Where were you?! And who the fuck is that?!)" Her father yelled making the two jump.
"L-lusehk, vydran(c-coming, father)," she looked at her dad then Maximo, "I-I'll see you tomorrow.. i hope.." she whispered. Then she walked over to her house, Maximo watched her vanish behind the front door.
Later that night, Maximo came back to (Y/n)'s house with his ax. He broke into the house and glared at (dad's name). He was standing over a (h/c) girl who was passed out on the floor. Maximo punched him in the face and (d/n) ran through the house to his room, shutting and locking the door. Maximo only smirked and cut the door down easily. Revealing a terrified man shaking in the corner of his room.
"F-fru yna oui?!(W-who are you?!)" His voice cracked.
"Maximo puta de mierda, y nunca hacerle daño nunca más!(Maximo you fucking bitch, and you will never hurt her ever again!)" He growled and raised his ax above his head. Then bringing it down, making the grown man yelp in pain. He repeated his action until he was sure the man was dead. He then walked back to where (Y/n) was and gently picked her up, carrying her to his house.

When she woke up, she was in Maximo's arms. She blushed deeply, and Maximo pulled her closer, waking up.
"M-Maximo..? Where are we..?" She looked up at him.
"My house," he looked into her (e/c) eyes with his own dark brown ones, "as long as i am alive, nothing will every hurt you again. I can promise you that.." he leaned closer to her and placed his lips against hers. She imediatelly kissed back and blushed softly. "Te.. te amo.. (i love you..)(Y/n).." he burried his face in her soft hair.
"Maximo.. te quiero demasiado..(i love you too..)" she smiled and kissed him again and nuzzled her head in the crook of his neck then she muttered, "dryhg oui.. dryhg oui cu silr.(thank you.. thank you so much.)" Before falling asleep in his arms again.





This was a request for SuperNerdy7777
I am sorry if 2P Spain is OC this is my first time using him! (Haha.. that sounded wrong!) i really hope i got him right.. if not then please don't kill me!
Languages: Al Bhed! (Yes i am a final fantsy geek.. Pid e zicd muja icehk drec myhkiyka!) And Spanish!
Hetalia: the awesome one who made it! And no not Prussia, China, or Korea!
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Milicent101 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 8, 2014
I have havr friend named yna.......
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vexalin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I WAS RIGHT!!! I knew it was Al Bhed. And they said it was useless HA-HA-HA I sure showed them!! I REGRET NOTHING!!!!! Cunno im a big final fantasy fan...
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I taught my friends the language and now we speak to each other with out the teachers knowing what were saying
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vexalin Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I wish i could do that all my friends are into 1st shooters...well i can always talk to myself
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well you could just start cursing them out and they won't understand you :3
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vexalin Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i've been doing that but i think their catching on
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Translate words from other languages to Albehd
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:iconvexalin:
vexalin Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
hmmmm nice! i'll try it, thanks!
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YamiIwagakure Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Hello~ hey, it was really cute! 
Do you mind some corrections for your spanish translator? No bad intention, just for you to know ^^ (hope you do not mind ó.o)

"(...)and you will never hurt her ever again!)" => "y tu no volveras a (lastimarla/hacerle daño) nunca mas" ... I think it sounds better that way -w-
"i love you too"=> I think you wanted to say "Yo tambien te amo"

anyway, I liked it, it was pretty cute :3 (muajajaja death >:3)

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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I used Google translate and I cannot fluently read or speak any other language than English and Albehd.
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YamiIwagakure Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
fluently... Albehd ??? THAT IS AWESOME >w<
I am not into final fantasy, but anyway, jajaja Wheeeeee emote 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oac ed ec
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YamiIwagakure Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
jajaja xD
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Iamthehero2013 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Student General Artist
This was so sweet! I think you got him down. There really needs to be more of Spain's 2p sexiness
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you and I think I might be able to write more of him in the future
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Iamthehero2013 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay! Does 2p Spain have an official name? Because I wrote a story on him and I used his 1p name because I didn't know his 2p name. (Plus I really like the name Toni! ^^)
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know, i read some stories where his name is Maximo and i liked that name so i used it. Until we know from the creator, there's no telling what his name is
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Iamthehero2013 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Hmm...... I guess I'm kepping Toni!
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excentricaluli Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I like it!! it was sweet!!!! :) 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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excentricaluli Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
its nothing!! :) 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Every time some one tells me some thing like that it make my whole day awesome
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excentricaluli Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
well I understand, and I'm glad I make your day then, :D 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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excentricaluli Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
:D 
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Exorcest Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I was wondering why that language seemed so familiar but I just couldn't pin point it wow I feel kinda slow.
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I couldn't do any of the translations with out my translating apps..
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Exorcest Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
It's okay I can't either.
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crazycherry459 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Nice we need more 2p Spain anyway! Awesome story!
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your wish is my command
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crazycherry459 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist
ha I knew rubbing that lamp was a good idea!!! XD
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DR. OCTAGONTAPUS BLAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGHHHHH!


Sorry i couldn't help it
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crazycherry459 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist
lol XD I know how that is!
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha
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SuperNerdy7777 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I love this! For your first time using 2p Spain, you did fantastic!

Thank you for taking my request :D!
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and your welcome! You is my first request person
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SuperNerdy7777 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Well I'm glad I am :). I hope you get more requests soon!
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AskOrlenaLouisiana Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(( You might wanna include translations for both languages. Other than that, good job ))
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and i will do that real quick
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AskOrlenaLouisiana Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Np
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