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"Hey, Toni! You coming?" a beautiful (h/c) girl called out to the green eyed Spaniard who was hanging out with his two friends, Francis and Gilbert.
"ah! (Y/n)! I'll be there in a second!" he smiled and turned to his friends, "I'll see jou two later! bye!" he quickly walked over to (Y/n) who was in a (fave. color) sundress and she had a (fave. flower) in her hair. Antonio smiled big at his child hood friend and the two left to go to the beach.
Francis frowned and turned to Gilbert, who was watching Toni and (Y/n) walking on the sand.
"I can see what's 'appening," Francis sighed.
"Vhat?" Gilbert looked over at his French friend.
"And zhey don't 'ave a clue," Francis continued ignoring Gilbert, Francis frowned as (Y/n) and Toni's hands intertwined.
"Vho?" Gilbert frowned.
"Zhey'll fall in love," Francis gestured to the two who were laughing at something (Y/n) said, "and 'ere's zhe bottom line. Our trio's down to two!"
"Oh," Gilbert frowned at the thought of the Bad Touch Trio turning into the Bad Touch Duo, "vell isn't zhere any zing ve can do?" He looked at the two again and noticed the sun was starting to set.
"Ze sweet caress of twilight," Francis continued, "Zhere's magic everywhere, and with all zhis romantic atmosphere, disaster's in zhe air!"
Toni smiled down at (Y/n), who was smiling back. The two made their way to a beach bar and ordered some thing to drink. The Spaniard was planning on confecing his love to (Y/n), he just didn't know how to.
"So many things to tell her," Toni thought to him self, "but how to make her see, the truth about my past?" he shook his head, "Impossible! She'd turn away from me." Toni had basically vanished off the face of the earth about ten years ago and he just recently came back with his two friends and (Y/n) found him she was so surprised he came back. they were over joyed when they found each other, but in the ten years he'd been gone, he was a pirate, and he knew she would turn away from him if he told her about his past.
"Toni? you ok?" (Y/n) snapped him out of his thoughts and he didn't even realize that he'd been staring at her the whole time.
"huh? oh, si, chica. I'm fine," he smiled. (Y/n) smiled back and they finished their drinks and left, after Toni paid for the drinks.
"He's holding back, he's hiding," (Y/n) thought to he self, "but what, I can't decide, why won't he be the king I know he is, the king I see inside?" She sighed softly and remembered when they were younger. They always played house, but instead of being the daddy, Toni was the king, and instead of being the mommy, (Y/n) was the queen, and Toni's cousin, Lovino was the fool. Toni would always be kind and caring and so would (Y/n). One day Lovino wanted to be the king but Toni wouldn't let him because he wanted to be (Y/n)'s king.
Toni smirked and ran over to a small cliff and jumped into the ocean.
"T-TONI?!" (Y/n) ran over to the cliff and got on her knees and looked into the water, looking for him, only to be pulled into the water by Toni. (Y/n) gasped and quickly swam back to the cliff, Toni smiled and climbed up next to her. (Y/n) smirked at him and playfully pushed him back into the water, and ran back to the sand, Toni quickly followed her and they chased some Seagulls off the beach and chased each other, running around and splashing each other with the water.
After they were done playing in the water and they were completely soaked, Toni took her by the hands and pulled her close, placing one hand on her waist and the other holding her hand, getting what he was doing, (Y/n) placed her free hand on his shoulder, and Toni lead her in dancing. He then sang softly into her ear, "Can jou feel the love tonight? The peace the evening brings the world, for once, in perfect harmony. With all its living things."
(Y/n) smiled and softly sang back, "Can you feel the love tonight? You needn't look too far. Stealing through the night's uncertainties, love is where they are."
"(Y/n).. there is some thing I need to tell jou," he pulled her closer to him and whispered into her ear, "Te amo, (Y/n)." he then put his lips onto her soft ones, which made (Y/n) blush deeply, and then melt into the soft sweet kiss. Toni pulled away and looked into her (e/c) eyes with his green ones.
"I love you too, Toni," she smiled big and pulled him into another kiss.
A few meters away at the beach bar, Francis and Gilbert were watching (Y/n) and Toni.
"And if 'e falls in love, tonight," Francis said on the verge of tears, "it can be assumed.."
"His carefree days viz us are history," Gilbert frowned.
"In short, our pall is doomed!!" they both said at the same time and broke down into tears!!!














Hetalia belongs to who made it.
you belong to the sexy Spaniard.
And
The song belongs to the Lion King
The Lion king belongs to Disney.
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MysteriousFanGurl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I was freaking singing the song in my head XD
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha nice
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sakunae Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The BTT don't have to break up! But if any girl gets to close to my Spain they'll have an unfortunate accident... *russia smile*
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
france thinks its bad to love just one person in the story?
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sakunae Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No. I'm just a yandere. *russia smile*
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ok
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kemonekko123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The only thing I didn't like is that "Jou" Part.

We hispanics say "You" Not "Jou".

But otherwise...It was quiet presentable and nice to read.
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry but i was just copping off another story i read
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kemonekko123 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Now you know.
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes I do and thank you
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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
You guys know your trio days don't have to end.... You can hang out but if Toni gets near another woman more than pg rated kind of stuff :iconscarybelarusplz: Your all going to pay~
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that's what they mean, they can't pick up women together like they use to if Toni gets with (Y/n). and Francy pants in this story thinks that its bad to love just one person?
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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
I know what I meant like they can hang out and have fun but they wont be picking up women together because of the obvious
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i know
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NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Oh my god I loves that
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Your welcome :D
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otaku-wolfs-xD Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
God i fucking loved this so much!! And the Lion king too TT.TT
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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otaku-wolfs-xD Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
your welcome!
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HeartOfBlackGold Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Um...you're not submitting correctly.

These are journals, not deviations.

Go to the Submit tab at the top of your screen and click 'Submit Art' to post your deviations in the proper format.
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm using my brothers computer and he doesn't have any word programs on his computer
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