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Ber knew she would be safer if they left Mathis's territory, so that's what he did, but he couldn't carry her around they way he was. But he couldn't swallow her either, his body would digest her quickly, because he hadn't eaten anything in weeks.

"BERWALD!! WHERE IS THE HUMAN?!" he could hear Mathis yell in the distance. (Y/n) clung to him, shaking in fear. Ber then slithered across the border. "Berwald! If you leave," Mathis huffed, trying to catch his breath, "consider you're self exiled!"

"F'ne," Ber glared at him and hissed, "you're n't t'kin' away m' mate." He slithered off and glanced back at the four nagas who had gathered at the border.

"B-ber.." (Y/n) softly spoke up, "I-I'm sorry."

"D'n't b'.. It w's m' fault, I should h've made s're I lost th'm b'fore I came t' see ya," he held her closer and made his way through the unknown territory, keeping his guard up. He soon came across a familiar sent, he hissed softly and set his mate down at the base of a tree, and hid her with the bushes around her. "St'y here, 'nd b' v'ry quiet," he whispered to her and she nodded, listening to the sound of rustling leaves, of him moving away from her, she then heard nothing but silence. 'He must have climbed a tree,' she thought to her self, and then she heard several different hisses. She covered her mouth and nose to muffle her breathing. The hisses only grew louder. She didn't recognize them as her Berwald's hisses, his hiss was soft but powerful, but these hisses, one was melodic, one was powerful, and one was almost cocky like.

Berwald was watching the three nagas come into view, only to see his three cousins, Ludwig, Gilbert, and Roderick. 'Oh great,' he hissed to him self. Ludwig looked around, he could smell something, but he didn't know what it was.

"Vait.." he looked at the other two Germanic naga's, "Sssomezhing'ss here.." he looked at (Y/n)'s hiding place and slithered over to it, Gilbert and Roderick followed him. Ludwig took his red, black and gold tail and moved the bushes away to see a young female human with (h/c) hair and dull (e/c) eyes.

"keseseses~ You found a human! Und she's a frau too! Zhat iss awesome! Danke for finding a mate for me, bruder!" Gil wrapped his black and white tail around (Y/n)'s waist pulling her to him. She tried pushed him away, but she was too weak.

"B-ber!" she squeaked.

"Ber..?" the three looked at each other, then the shadow of a very large naga over casted them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Part three: you is here~!

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e2s86 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
nice

next part
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VocaloidAnimeFreak12 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
Please tell me that there's going to be another chapter. I'd hate to see this beautiful fanfic go to waste. T^T
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Hashtagpeople Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Must have more 
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wolfang009 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!! nd hk, yo gave me  go idea to do Wolf!Russa X Blind! Reader XD
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok then
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Lilife1234 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Is there a next one
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No not yet..
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lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is there a next one  i when to look at your gallery and it had nuthin i cant wat to fined the next one 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All of my stories are journals and i have had the worse writers block ever...
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lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol thats ok just tack your time =)
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I should have some up during the next month..
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lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool cant wat =)
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HetalianLoverXD Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
This is awesome!
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Like my fifth tome reading this thing!!!! Love it!!! Please make more
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Tallstar27 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
OO MORE PLEASE!! MORE!!
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Oh sh't
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musickrazy123 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
This is awesome! Please write more!
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kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
I need more
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bb258 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Please write moreeesss!!!
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jenafaye12 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student General Artist
:D ok i love this
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horrarmares00 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome !!!!!!!
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ive read this soo many times!!! Plz make more
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Pippymcgamer Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
:iconohfuckplz: -they're faces when they see Sweden!
:iconcuddlesplz: thx for teh part 3!!
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Misachico Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I want more!! ^_^ it's so good... 
please? pretty please? :D
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Winters-Bone Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
To... be followed ?...
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What?
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Winters-Bone Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Waiting for the following... Of the story...
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:iconkentaka123456:
kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh ok sorry
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Winters-Bone Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So... Are you going to write it ?...
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm working on that... but I'm so busy with work school and my mom's wedding right now I can't really think straight right now.. not to mention my illness is really kicking my ass right now so I'm not really worried about my stories right now.. sorry
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Winters-Bone Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How on earth can you have so much stress.... 
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea..
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea..
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seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
want more please!
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
They be like oh shiz
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ja
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
ZE AWESOME PRUSSIA IZ AWESOME! :iconawesomeprussiaplz:
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MOUR plz
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Angiall25 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Artist
AWESOME! Love it. I can't wait for more ^_^
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murrayb Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student General Artist

" Danke for finding a mate for me, bruder!" Gil wrapped his black and white tail around (Y/n)'s waist pulling her to him. She tried pushed him away, but she was too weak.

"B-ber!" she squeaked.

"Ber..?" the three looked at each other, then the shadow of a very large naga over casted them.



"PUT M' MATE D'WN!"

 


love it so far

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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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murrayb Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
ill be watching for part4
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m00nlight101 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh shii-! Sweden is going to be pissed!
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yep
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Animelover20014 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student
I love it!!!!!!!! It is so Awsome
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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laralovesherdogs Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've never seen a Sweden Naga... I like it ;D
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TheOliviaKirkland Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my! This is amazing love! >w<" But the cliff hanger is killing me... Can't wait to read more if you write it!! You have talent poppet~  
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kentaka123456 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How do i have talent?
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