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*******this has Nicolai being the creep he is, you have been warned********

 

 

 

(Y/n) looked up with her big (e/c) eyes, that were filled with fear, and looked at the strange man in front of her.

"oh yes, big brother Ivan will be pleased with what I found-- wait is that my book and my cookies?" he glared at her and walked toward her. (Y/n) could scream as he grabbed her arm and yanked her off the bed, "stop screaming!"

"Lemme go!" (Y/n) yelled and tried to pull away, but she was too weak, "Big Brother!! Help!!"

"that bug isn't going to hear you," he smirked, "now come along before I tell Ivan that, that but has been stealing from him, then he's really going to get it!" (Y/n) remembered the story that her brother had told her and her eyes started to water. she did not want to meet the evil prince and she sure as hell didn't want to go to his castle, but she didn't want her brother to get hurt either.

"I-if I go with you to Ivan's castle.. will big brother not be hurt?" she asked innocently. Nicolai just stared at her like she was an idiot. He had no idea what she was talking about. Ivan's castle? Toris not getting hurt? he didn't know if she was acting or if she was just that stupid. He decided that she was just that stupid, throwing her over his shoulder he started carrying her away to Ivan's house.

(Y/n) was kicking and screaming the whole  time which annoyed the hell out of Nicolai. About half way there he dropped the girl in the thick snow and glared at her. She whimpered and shook, seeing her shaking, crying form he smirked again, "are you going to be quiet and let me take you to Ivan's place?" She shook her head, Nicolai growled and reached into his pocket, he pulled out a white rag and shoved it into her face. she gasped and blackness started to cloud her vision.

Nicolai carried the girl to his destination, "oh big brother~" he smirked, "oh~ come look at what I found~!"

"What is it now Nicolai, I'm very busy, da," Ivan walked into the room and he stared at the girl in his arms for a few moments, "you found a girl? where?"

"that little bug, Toris was hiding her in the forest, and he's been stealing food from you," Nicolai smirked, "and taking it to her every morning before the sun comes up and every night when we go to sleep."

"he's been doing what?" Ivan's dark aura came from him, "well lets see how Toris likes it when he finds the girl so precious to him missing from her hiding place, take her to the basement and tie her up, da."

"yes brother" Nicolai did what his brother wanted, once he was done tying her up he smirked down at her. He took off his gloves and ran his fingers through her soft (h/l) (h/c) locks, he then took out his knife and cut a lock of her hair off. he took the freshly cut hair between his fingers and brought the strands to his nose, took a deep breath of her sent and smiled softly. He stared at her intensely, studying all her features, he reached out to touch her face, but jumped back when he heard the door open and foot steps coming down the stairs. Nicolai quickly stood up and put the lock of hair in his pocket.

"Little brother? what are you doing down here?" Dmitri looked at his brother, then at the girl laying on the cold ground, "who is she?"

"I don't know, but Toris had been hiding and stealing food for her," Nicolai frowned.

"well, shouldn't you at least give her a blanket or something to keep warm?" Dmitri held out a blanket for his brother, Nicolai snatched it from his grasp and dropped it on (Y/n).

"Why are you down here?" Nicolai glared.

"Ivan needed some thing from down here," Dmitri walked over to a box and left the basement carrying it, "if I were you I would come with me." Nicolai grumbled something under his breath and reluctantly followed his brother away from (Y/n). His latest obsession.

 

 

 

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he's gonna threaten my brother? AH HELL NAH!!!! hurt my brother and i will MAIM YOU!!! *sinister aura of death and scowl of lividness*
and he cut my hair?? man, he has a huge sack to be doing this to me!!!! which part?!? cuz i have pong hair that i'm still growing out and i have hair that frames my face. if he cut off some of my long hair, there will be HELL to PAY!!!! *evil, dark and foreboding aura forms*
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kentaka123456 Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He cut off a small part in the front, and dont harm him.. he just wants to be loved
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Sunflowerllama Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome story! I really like it. My reaction to him cutting my hair was, "Oh hell naw. You DID NOT just cut my hair." *dark aura*
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kentaka123456 Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nicolai: i only took a small part of it.. *sits in the corner smelling your hair*
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Sunflowerllama Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well my hair does smell fabulous. I'm slightly alarmed that I found what you're doing to be perfectly normal.....O_O
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kentaka123456 Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nicolai: it is normal, isn't it?
Me: you should keep reading.. but thats if you want!
Nicolai: don't push my princess in to doing anything! *comes at me with a knife*
Me: meep.. *runs away*
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Sunflowerllama Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*blushes* *whispers* He called me his princess. *beats inner fangirl down with a stick* *calls after you* Of course I'll keep reading! Nicolai, please don't stab the amazing writer. Without her we won't be able to be together an-and that would be horrible!!! *bursts into tears*
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kentaka123456 Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nicolai: *stops and looks at you then at me then back at you* d-don't cry!
Me: *vanishes and goes to germany* (haha see ya suckers!)
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Sunflowerllama Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O-okay. *dabs at eyes with a tissue* Bye~! Bon voyage! Be sure to bring back chocolate! Wait, is she going to the country or the person? Hmmm...*begins muttering incoherently to self*
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kentaka123456 Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: both!
Nicolai: *gives you chocolate* marry me!
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